Wednesday, November 25, 2015

Style Academy #3

            Although I was not focusing on using the style academy exercise to revise my issues paper, I found that it helped quite a lot in the reflecting process.  I chose to study the manipulation of sentence parts for effect.  I found the video extremely helpful because it really just added to the last exercise I did on phrases and clauses.  I feel like knowing both of these skills will definitely help me in the future.

            After revising my issues paper, I was able to use this study to reflect on what went well.  A major focus for me with my issues paper was to stay completely clear with what I was presenting.  I felt that I was able to do so in the way in which I formed my sentences and paragraphs.  The purpose of manipulating sentences for effect is something which I feel that I've been working on all semester, but more mindfully after doing this exercise.  Doing this manipulation of sentence parts exercise really helped me understand what I've been doing well and what I can do better.